Template talk:Lede

"This starship and others can be unlocked for all characters on your account by raising a KDF character to level 65 or purchasing the Cross Faction Flying Unlock from the Zen Store"

I think this makes it sound like the ship itself can be unlocked accountwide. Something like "faction restrictions can be removed with Cross Faction Flying" or "The Blah Blah is a T6 cruiser which may be flown by Starfleet characters, including Federation-aligned Romulan Republic and Dominion characters, or by any faction with Cross Faction Flying", would be clearer. 176.127.193.241 13:57, 27 January 2021 (UTC)


 * Lede updated, I think it is clearer now. --Damixon (talk) 11:34, 28 January 2021 (UTC)


 * Should we further shorten it to: "The faction restrictions can be removed with the Cross Faction Flying Unlock."? Currently, it looks like this: "The faction restrictions of this starship can be removed by having a level 65 KDF character or by purchasing the Cross Faction Flying unlock from the Zen Store." ..Intro text got longer with the inclusion of this and info on the tutorial. --Damixon (talk) 17:17, 29 January 2021 (UTC)