This article is really a walk-through for the Episode. It doesn't really provide the factual information contained in-game such as NPC dialog, location it's obtained, any prerequisites etc. The information contained herein is good, but not sure it shouldn't be listed as a walk-through. We might wish to consider creating an "episode template" and I suggest that we have "walk-through" be a heading within the article template and or added a sub-page called /Walkthrough to the Episode template. In other words, you would go to Azura Blues for the factual information, but go to Mission: Azura Blues/Walkthrough for this type of content.
Also, I think that comments such as "This episode is pretty straight forward, and eases you into the layout for episodic content." may be true, but it is an opinion, and other players may not find it to be true depending on the character set up and/or aptitude in playing MMO's. I'm not saying that this comment for this particular episode may not be 100% correct, but it can lead to a slippery slope on a fact based wiki when you allow opinions to be posted in articles as a matter of habit. One way to handle comments like this is to either added a "Notes" or "Comments" section to your template or restrict them to the discussion page.
I have left the article essentially unchanged until such time that a consensus is established.
-- Rohar (talk|contribs) 22:22, 14 January 2010 (UTC)
- I've moved the walkthrough in that page to a sub-page, as you recommended above. –TerranRich ( hail ∙ log ∙ comm ) 19:31, 26 January 2010 (UTC)